I love your writing, but this honestly leaves me conflicted. I would have liked for Draco to actually safeword and then talk to Harry about his boundaries and expectations, instead of stewing for an enture week. And I don't really like Harry's attitude, I don't really know why, maybe because he does come across as a little condescending with that here "You wanted to be bested? You have been." If he just wants to fuck, well then fine, then he is not my headcanon Harry and I should stop reading this before it makes me really uncomfortable.
But if his cocky behaviour was because wants to take care of Draco and make sure that he doesn't overwork himself and tries to find a way of making Draco relax, while not really knowing how to get through to the blond, then that sounds like Harry Potter again.
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Date: 2017-10-14 09:03 pm (UTC)But if his cocky behaviour was because wants to take care of Draco and make sure that he doesn't overwork himself and tries to find a way of making Draco relax, while not really knowing how to get through to the blond, then that sounds like Harry Potter again.
Am I making any sense?